Daoist_KittyKat
either way your fanfic is good even if i wished the fanfic would have been more gounded, if thats the right way to say it?
In the beggining mc was like an actual soldier fighting and it was really cool watching him Drop in ODST style, Now he’s more like a God on the battlefield is not so much a soldier I believe that’s what the commenter means, For example his first interdimensional contract was really cool watching him defend the breach in the wall with his fellow mercenaries like actual soldiers
Daoist_KittyKat:still don't understand, sorry