so far the story is great and I can't wait to see what you have in store for the MC. Does he get his powers from an infinity stone? Does this marvel world have mutants, fantastic. 4?
the pacing isn't bad so far and there hasn't been any grammar error. also is it going to be 1st pov all through the story, it's just sometimes when reading "i" and not "he" it feels off for some reason