I don't know about you lots, but this is embarrassing. An adult in all but mind and soul tried to asset dominance over teenagers.
Teens basically don't care about rules, why impose your adult view?. But he does have mastery on his magic
it semms like scene changes arent smooth. didnt know gis demonstration was not in the great hall but in professor minerva's room. it wpuld greatly improve the reading experience if you can add POvV or setting changes. nonetheless, it was a great read. looking forward to more chapters
