Thirty_six_Hours
There are way too many plot points in this story at this point. You gotta trim the fat before it gets too much. Zoom has to die no ifs or buts. Somehow, the whole chapter was spent on kara's decision when that could have easily been shortened to advance the story more. I'm sure they are ways to get to the point you're going without dragging it out as long as you did while still advancing the story.