Thirty_six_Hours
Alright, this is starting to become a slug to read. Yes, it's interesting and yes we like it. But you're falling into the trap that it's the work of a fan from a fanfiction. This is not about DC characters, it's about your character in DC universe. The fact that the MC barely appears, never do anything and it's always the same whenever he appears it's making this story from a 8/10 to a 4/10. Let's be honest, we are here for the overpowered Rob MC, not to see a dude that likes to sit and watch the world without doing anything or even being mentioned, just know, you're still in time to fix it.
(Google translate) Well, it's been fun to read, and I'm enjoying the world and character building, I'm not having any problems just with that, but my opinion on this subject and the various comments about it, I believe that if I had with the complete book, there wouldn't be this problem because the person would only read half of it and go to the part they want, so the problem is that as we have to wait anxiously for the release, when the day finally arrives, it's over that the MC isn't even mentioned once and that's when the chapter ends, then you have to wait longer until another one comes and so on.... so let's say that to "solve" this, it would be at least mentioning the MC a little more even though minimum in the chapters, I say this, not saying to stop the creation of the world and the growth of the character itself, I just say to maybe do that, reduce the boring comments, because my fear is to take this so seriously that end up giving up, and I wouldn't like to see that because I'm curious and anxious to see what happens, because we know that the character is OP, so the least I expect and would like to see is the possible growth of the MC's personality with all This power, not that I would like to see a play of his from time to time, I would, but let's face it, he's OP so what would be the fun? The cool thing is to see him dealing with this, his character growth, the opinions of the other MC, how his actions changed in the future and so on... well, I talked about more lol
Well pls consider that speedsters don’t need to exit super speed to attack zoom would probably never stand still against them again, Speedsters have a different time perception crazy reflexes and the like getting caught of guard even with super sonic attacks is laughable and only happens in comics to be able to beat the villain or hero but it’s really distracting