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Comments of chapter undefined of The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows

Artoriastheabyssen
ArtoriastheabyssenLv14Artoriastheabyssen

He shouldn’t have resurrected her, it would have been better if he had that reaction and realized she couldn’t be brought back, you basically made the character a god that can just kill and make someone a new body. He killed an innocent person, he should have had those same feelings but have to live with the regret of killing her. Now there are no real consequences for that action

DaoistBlueCabbag3
DaoistBlueCabbag3Lv1DaoistBlueCabbag3

Bro? You're arguing with a SI Fanfic writer who killed someone coz they thought it was cool. What were expecting from them? Hahaha

Artoriastheabyssen:Yeah but his actions have no consequences, he feels sad for a bit and snaps his finger and she’s back, details like this make the difference between a good novel’s character development and a great novel.
Destroyer404
Destroyer404Lv14Destroyer404

I just felt bad for the maid tbh, she didn't do anything wrong (I know a lot of people will agree in my statement)

DarkDemon_KING
DarkDemon_KINGLv14DarkDemon_KING

Yes ,you did a really good job by Not taking both sides and creating a brand new way for yourself . stand proud Thank you for this wonderful chapter

Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12Culture_Lover

Well, it's your story, so you can do what you want. Comovauror I know how difficult it is to write the personality of a character, especially the MC, but I recommend that you not always get carried away by the opinions of the readers and have your own criteria about the construction of your MC and the direction of your fanfic . I'm still enjoying your story 😊

T_Rin
T_RinLv14T_Rin

Yea you did good with the maid, because your mc cid hates diabolos cult when they kill innocent like a bug, but your mc did the same thing to his family maid and that doesn’t make sense. But now you fixed it 👍

Rackon22
Rackon22Lv13Rackon22

this chapter was good character development for the mc

jenangbungbung
jenangbungbungLv3jenangbungbung

Wait... hold on... Isn't Claire too easygoing to accept another wife for MC with the attitude Claire should have? I thought Claire would lock up MC for a week 😂 and punish before allowing anything else or showing anger or something. But it's up to you, this is your story so do as you please, writer. Keep creating, I'm enjoying the story.

daydreamer_no1
daydreamer_no1Lv14daydreamer_no1

honestly it was meh

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Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv2Pengamat_Ketiga

It's just my feeling, or this chapter is really short

Animeconcept
AnimeconceptLv15Animeconcept

Utah bit this was a good choice the deciding to due your best to not involve innocents you have mind magic anyone sees just wipe their mind of the most recent event and replace it with the memory of either just one of them coming out and the other most likely him traveling through some other unseen means he is a magic assassin after all

l_SilverShadow_l
l_SilverShadow_lLv4l_SilverShadow_l

It was all a social experiment and we failed 🤣

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Thanks for the great chapter. Glad he revived her and was able to have a moment of introspection

Charlotte_Mage
Charlotte_MageLv13Charlotte_Mage

best chapter ever he realized his mistakes and fixed them, I feel more at ease now

Crom_Darkstar
Crom_DarkstarLv4Crom_Darkstar

wow author your genius scares me too...I applaud for you just turn a mistake into an opportunity for character development.really smart

Zaitro
ZaitroLv12Zaitro

Author, I would really like to know why did you decide to kill the Maid on first place instead of doing something else. It looks like that was the first to solution to the issue. That was weird.

Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2Arnab_Panday

Good .

Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Thanks for the chapter

Long_Hao_Chen
Long_Hao_ChenLv3Long_Hao_Chen

I almost abandoned the story when MC did this random murder, I thought MC was different from the original Cid, but when that happened, I discovered that in some ways he was worse, at least I think the original Cid wouldn't do that or would ? After all, the original Cid is super selfish and only thinks about himself, the world revolves around him, because the people around him are just tools to enjoy his play called living in the shadows

JonRedSea
JonRedSeaLv14JonRedSea

Thanks for the Chapter

Hum_
Hum_Lv4Hum_

thanks for the chapter

Angor
AngorLv1Angor

Congratulations on transforming: a hitman, lord of death and darkness into a character with a hero complex.