Shadow_D_Monarch3
He shouldn’t have resurrected her, it would have been better if he had that reaction and realized she couldn’t be brought back, you basically made the character a god that can just kill and make someone a new body. He killed an innocent person, he should have had those same feelings but have to live with the regret of killing her. Now there are no real consequences for that action
Bro? You're arguing with a SI Fanfic writer who killed someone coz they thought it was cool. What were expecting from them? Hahaha
Artoriastheabyssen:Yeah but his actions have no consequences, he feels sad for a bit and snaps his finger and she’s back, details like this make the difference between a good novel’s character development and a great novel.
Well, it's your story, so you can do what you want. Comovauror I know how difficult it is to write the personality of a character, especially the MC, but I recommend that you not always get carried away by the opinions of the readers and have your own criteria about the construction of your MC and the direction of your fanfic . I'm still enjoying your story 😊
Wait... hold on... Isn't Claire too easygoing to accept another wife for MC with the attitude Claire should have? I thought Claire would lock up MC for a week 😂 and punish before allowing anything else or showing anger or something. But it's up to you, this is your story so do as you please, writer. Keep creating, I'm enjoying the story.
Utah bit this was a good choice the deciding to due your best to not involve innocents you have mind magic anyone sees just wipe their mind of the most recent event and replace it with the memory of either just one of them coming out and the other most likely him traveling through some other unseen means he is a magic assassin after all
I almost abandoned the story when MC did this random murder, I thought MC was different from the original Cid, but when that happened, I discovered that in some ways he was worse, at least I think the original Cid wouldn't do that or would ? After all, the original Cid is super selfish and only thinks about himself, the world revolves around him, because the people around him are just tools to enjoy his play called living in the shadows