Vulkizaro_Zoromi
Good writing, I like how you elaborate on Hephy's expressions when observing and describing the weapon to make its value clear for both the present and the future. Also, the fact that gods have both passive and active powers apart from the Arcane is intriguing. And, always remember to carefully handle the personalities of the characters I really enjoy how the story is progressing.
thank you so much فَلَمّا أَنَخنا رَكَزنا الرِماحَ فَوقَ مَكارِمِنا وَالعُلا وَبِتنا نُقَبِّلُ أَسيافَنا وَنَمسَحُها مِن دِماءِ العِدا لِتَعلَمَ مِصرُ وَمَن بِالعِراقِ وَمَن بِالعَواصِمِ أَنّي الفَتى وَأَنّي وَفَيتُ وَأَنّي أَبَيتُ وَأَنّي عَتَوتُ عَلى مَن عَتا وَما كُلُّ مَن قالَ قَولاً وَفى وَلا كُلُّ مَن سيمَ خَسفاً أَبى وَلا بُدَّ لِلقَلبِ مِن آلَةٍ وَرَأيٍ يُصَدِّعُ صُمَّ الصَفا I wrote it for no reason and called