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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)

SliverFang
SliverFangLv13SliverFang

Thanks for the chapter, nice battles, but you got messy there. The battle with Electabuzz is interrupted with a section against Raichu that isn't even used later on... Also, Dragon Claw is an odd way to finish this. Charmeleon had activated Blaze there, no? Why not use the boost and do a fire move?

DaoistKq1vOg
DaoistKq1vOgLv4DaoistKq1vOg

Aside from the weird drama at mt moon the only thing I don’t like about this story so far is leaf tagging along

blddevil
blddevilLv1blddevil

... Why is he agitated and desperate ? He's a real gym leader unlike misty's sisters, also using a dragon move with blaze activated ? Ash level IQ

Black_Dragongod
Black_DragongodLv15Black_Dragongod

nice fight, but this chapter is jumbled up and a lot of paragraphs are repeated....

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

SupremeEdzzz
SupremeEdzzzLv4SupremeEdzzz

Leylin_Farlier99
Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

TFTC.