Comments of chapter undefined of Ben 10/MCU

Ben 10/MCU

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Andrew_maconhaLv3Andrew_maconha

The protagonist is very generic, not from several similar stories but in his personality, he seems like an isekai protagonist who tries to look like an adult but inside he is still a teenager (which is worse than being a child) I'm not saying that the problem with being a bit childish even as an adult but you know it's very generic. I wrote too much again

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Shane_Delgado_03AuthorShane_Delgado_03

Noted

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Simonki_AmpuerixLv12Simonki_Ampuerix

Thanks for the chapter

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RochirushLv10Rochirush

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Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

Thanks for the chapter

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WarMachine78Lv14WarMachine78

Thanks for the chapter

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micas_98Lv3micas_98

Nice. Keep it going

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Vagner69heheLv1Vagner69hehe

Thanks

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SolgalaoLv14Solgalao

Thanks for the chapter!

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JokerJay75Lv4JokerJay75

you need to work on your grammar because I see a lot of mistakes in the chapter

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WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

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