Man the structure of these last couple of chapters has been bad. I've got no idea how old he is anymore or when all this stuff is happening, everything is completely disorganized and jumping from one thing to another then back again.
How exaggerated this already is, you get so complicated with the new race that the time is going to come when you are going to block yourself what you are not going to know what to do, the story started very well but became insipid