Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in originals
Reborn in originals
Adams2004
Chapter comments28
dropped after the second wish. this is absolute garbage, and btw author it's invincible not invisible if you're wanting them to be killable.5 wishes and perks to boot was already a stretch to the quality and longevity of this fanfic.why did you just have 3 wishes and a system? wish 1 to be a tribrid (you could have asked for the venom that kills originals which is a step up from klaus's venom)2. immunity to the weaknesses that the originals are vulnerable to.3. if you wanted a power separate from the tribrid you could have gone for illusion like silus.if you wanted to have a perk you could have asked for strength,speed,reflexes,senses and intellect to be idk 3 times that of Klaus thus giving the an additional advantage over the original family.the system could have been used just to keep track of timelines, maybe an inventory or maybe a mission feature or storebut you went and made it way over complicated and now by the time the main story kicks in the mc will be one punch man.boring and lackluster
This guy really spent 4 - wishes on people he has only seen on tv and acting as if they are his real family when he never met them. Its one thing to like characters in fiction but this is sort of absurd in my opinion. The "let me and my siblings immortal (only killable by him)" wish is more than enough, not to mention they would be originals anyway so why waste 3 more wishes on them?
