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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Ero World

Ranken
RankenLv13Ranken

Read some comments comparing this to CYOA... what's that?

darkest_light
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seriously? way to short a chapter.

GuardianofNightNyx
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Proofread your story, several paragraphs made zero sense in this chapter.

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

Trouxa_157
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Thanks for chapter 🤷😒

Maizuky_Nichan
Maizuky_NichanLv13Maizuky_Nichan

Hum...

Hollow_Daoist
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thanks for the chapter

WolfLord
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Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

dscot345
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Pettigrew only knew to go to Albania, because that’s where quarrel disappear and came back with Voldemort on his head. Pettigrew only knew that because he hanged out with Ron and Harry when they were talking about it. This Pettigrew shouldn’t know that yet, but doesn’t mean he won’t run. Second thing is character wanting to be a hero I thought he’s a Slytherin, self preservation, ambition and cunning is the name of the game. Be strong enough that he can withstand Voldemort. Hopefully it’s just say moronic thought and he’s not gonna be some kind of Griffindork.

Jared_Anderson
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Thanks for the chap!

Gekke_pool
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Tftc

Tyrant_Wild_Snail
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Thanks for the chapter !

michael_whiteley
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Thanks for the chapter.

Kilowann
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Thx for the chapter

Pedro_Llerenas
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thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next one 🖤.

Sabaroth_zarkiel
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Thank you for the chapter

Sema_
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Thansk for the chapter

guilherme99gc
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[img=update][img=gift][img=recommend] Thank you for the chapter 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 [img=recommend][img=gift][img=update].

KingConner
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Jin_Kazaragi
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Merci pour le chapitre !