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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Blood Raven

diegox_aedo
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GhoulDrago
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mhm, I guess this is not my cup of tea. You show a bit too little tell wayyy too much till it feels like an info dump, MC's like a Young Master edgelord. Meh, perhaps it's just preferences, have fun writing.

Gerier
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streiz
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Thank you for the chapter! I love it!

DaoistP7eWN9
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Congratulations, incredible work. Thanks for the chapter

DaoistaYohan
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Não entendi, os diálogos São de baixa qualidade e o MC é inconstante!