Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands

I’ll withhold my judgment on this for now. But honestly I can’t wait to sunny and NEPHIS reaction when they see the MC alive. Laslty MC X NEPHIS +1

Well... Firstly, thank you for the chapter, I imagine that the production and thought involved in making such plans is laborious, as with the addition of a new character there will be a whole new plot and new variables. Let's see how this goes, if by any chance it gets confusing or a little forced I'll let you know, I don't speak arrogantly as if I were someone renowned in writing, but I will humbly point out as a reader interested in your work.

I like this novel but author I just hope you delete this chapter and we never speak about this again

one of the best ss fanfic hands down... and as for the things that the author has done i believe that it has some meaning... long story short... let him cook!!!

This new character is far more relatable than your original mc both in terms of abilities and personality. Is this what is called author development?

I've always liked the concept of multiple reincarnaters. While she seems very annoying, I'm genuinely curious on what you have planned for the future.

Truthfully, I really don't like having multiple reincarnator(non-canon) in fanfic but I will hold it up for now and see where this go as long she will not be getting too much scenes time(Seen William is the Real MC). Also, I guess we finally will get spicy scenes with nephis and william (can't forget our blind beauty cassie and few more in the future)

I’ll try not to judge this new oc too hard but bruh I thought we was getting a chapter with cassie

It's your fanfic mate, do whatever you want, we (readers) are just here to enjoy our time and appreciate what you make.

There is nothing wrong with adding another reincarnator, the main thing is how the author will describe it all

thanks for the chapter

nice chapter

Nice chapter

No começo queria pegar minha tocha e forcado, mas vi uma personagem bem escrita e que não vai atrapalhar no protagonismo do nosso MC, fora que vai permitir um harem de maneira muito mais facil. Entao ta aprovado, mas vou ficar de vigia. Mais capitulos por favor.

Thx for the chap 🍪 I will hold my thoughts until I see how they get along

tftc

was the previous chapter changed or something cause i swear i remember the commander of the black knights thanking the mc at the end of the battle then turning into black smoke and disappearing

You took my name lol. also i think that's the first divine aspect user that doesn't also have a true name I've seen