Comments of chapter undefined of [One Piece:From The Ashes]-(hiatus)

Well, your story has potential and I hope you don’t abandon it (at least until the end of the war at the top). Also some words: 1) I don’t see the point in giving him a second df zoan, of course it will give him strength and endurance, but not much and for the most part it’s not as useful for logia as an interesting paramecia. 2) Waifus: I have no problems with Robin; Yamato is not sure because since you are going with Mugawara, she will appear closer to the end; I’m sorry that Nami is not there, she’s a beauty and it’s easier to “rewrite” her since she appears at the very beginning; then I'll be for Reiju or Uta. 3) I also hope you won’t give out strong enemies for the MC out of nowhere, because there will be almost no problems with logia in the first part of the grandline (Ace had almost no problems). that's all I wanted to say and I wish you to stay positive :D [Google translate]