Shadow_D_Monarch3
This is just my opinion. I think there is no need to start the plot with giving the main character wishes and the appearance of God. Because there are literally 1000 better than his wishes, he can get the powers of that de phoenix from people x or others. Also, if the plot needs it, it can appear an unknown god from nowhere and help the main character with any problem. This is a potentially bad start for me
You should not have used wishes , it would have been better if he was reborn with his ability because he died burning đ„ and that way you donât get any complaints regarding the wishâs because the mc has to do the best with what he has and that would make the story more interesting . Good luck author , wish you will and Iâll keep reading and I hope this turns out to be a great story