Comments of chapter undefined of Twilight : Justice for Jacob

Not a bad story but i still STRONGLY felt the simp mentality of the original Jacob here...I mean, on pretty much every chapter the guy was either taking care of Bella or fighting for her. The bit with Danielle started great (He was FINALLY moving from Bella) but then she turned...that was very much forced man. Seattle has almost eight hundred thousand people living it but the vamps somehow just managed to get her out of all of them? All of that just so Jacob could give power ups to the Cullens? Like i said, not a bad story but Jacob could still be considered a BIG simp for Bella and the Cullens here...

Buen trabajo

Thanks for the novel! Hope the next one's ending won't be cut too short. At least 2 chapters worth of ending probably.

Gostei.

Do it again

Pretty good, really enjoyes...gonna read the next one...new Ron here i come.

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u da best. thank you

thanks for the short story!

This is definitely a hanger of a fanfic 👍

Good Work