Comments of chapter undefined of NTR Rogue in the Apocalypse

good chapitre

you should not switch pov so frequently, like if its 3rd person POV then write 'this this this' john thought. you are using 3rd person POV most of the time but whenever you want to express john's thought you immediately switch to john's pov and then again. be consistent in which pov you want the dialogue should be.

tftc ♥️