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Comments of chapter undefined of NTR Rogue in the Apocalypse

ManDown
ManDownLv4ManDown

I'm gonna keep it real. It wasn't really a good start. The story starts with a lackluster line. You need something to hook the audience and honestly it's very pretentious. The descriptions, to MC's sad pessimistic exposition, to the lame one sided love scenario and the one dimensional bully. The idea is nothing special but it's not bad either, it's the execution where the flaw lies. I'm giving out my honest thoughts not hate, if you do end up re-writing the first chapter in the future please keep these flaw in mind, but I'm gonna keep reading see if it improves

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TheLastRemnants
TheLastRemnantsLv12TheLastRemnants

I love how it started off and eased into an intense dramatic and action packed scene verbally only. 👏 some people forget action can happen with words too. This was so intense and I’m loving the drama, it’s leaving me wanting to know more about why they were saying these things

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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13FallenAngeI

Nice start. TFTC

Yorbin
YorbinLv12Yorbin

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Arckane
ArckaneLv13Arckane

discord link is expired can you send me one

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

Ireadnovel
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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

Interesting start

WorldScholar
WorldScholarLv12WorldScholar

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Daoistdex3Xd
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Zefyr
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Zefyr
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Zefyr
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Zefyr
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teddi
teddiLv3teddi

Thanks for the chapter

Novel_Manga_2624
Novel_Manga_2624Lv3Novel_Manga_2624

Ntr

Dummybeing
DummybeingLv12Dummybeing

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza