Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball Alternative

Ok I would just like to say I got a few good laughs out of this chapter so thank you for that. Also I liked the way Nappa acted and showed more of his personality, which didn’t make him out to be such a brute. I also agree that Gohan is far too passive even when he fights Cell he never really gets aggressive unless you push him or he gets angry. So I’m looking forward to the next chapter of the novel.

How well done are the personalities of the characters, although the same thing happens as in the canon, the story does not feel repetitive or boring (translator)

I love where this is going I really wanna see where this ends up

I just finished binging all the chapters so far, and I absolutely love how the story is panning out. Yes it’s sticking fairly closely to the original story, but you’ve added in so many new details that make the story seem new. The personality you’ve developed for Nappa and Raditz? Amazing. The bit about the tail? I can genuinely see that being a thing the in original story. Keep up the great work!

When’s the mc going to appear same time as goku

Thanks for the chapter

thanks

Nice chapter

Thx for chap

Thanks for the chapter

Nice chapter

Great chapter