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MooseMans
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I like this Raditz, and this AU is interesting so far. It also seemingly is faithful to the Dbz in terms of mood and goku himself.

CH33KL4PP3R69
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Feel free to write however you want man. I don't know what bro is on about. If it fits the character have them swear, it shouldn't matter

Equuleus_Nox:Thank you! Trying my best to nail the characters as they are, except I have more character development planned than canon did.

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Hasan_Shopnil
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And Krillin is Dead,also don't use so much Swear words Pls.

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Yangfen
YangfenLv1Yangfen

raditz Jehovah's Witness

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Beyond_
Beyond_Lv3Beyond_

Good

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AvidReader962
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Guionista
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I always thought something, how someone like Vegeta did not realize the obvious, I say obvious that someone like him can destroy a meteorite the size of the moon and more, but an entire race with people stronger than him and on top of that full of people who can transform into a giant ape, it cannot destroy a meteorite, or else it cannot detect it, since they are a super advanced race and for a meteorite to destroy them it has to be the size of at least a planet

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OnlyGoodStuff_1
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thanks for the chapter

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La_o_n_u
La_o_n_uLv1La_o_n_u

excellent story, good pace, with fluid and entertaining conversations (translator)