Over_The_Horizon
I will start reading this, but I would like to give you an advise, break down the paragraphs. They are too long
Yup apologies! I’ll start that in later chapters. I’m too used to writing thesis in university
break down the massive paragraphs, it is too big and it's very easy to lose focus while reading that huge chunk
No grammatical errors!!Good.Is there going to be romance?and if so are you going to add Harem? I hope not.
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Yup! I'm reading this
Good 😉
10-17-23