Comments of chapter undefined of I Can Create My Own Avatars

I have an opinion and a suggestion. I've noticed that you frequently use the phrase 'as you can see' in your storytelling. It feels a bit out of place when reading a novel like this because we often encounter the phrase 'as you can see' in tutorial videos. Therefore, I suggest considering a different approach to storytelling. I know that you also read stories, and we both know that we don't often come across the phrase 'as you can see' when reading novels like this. But please don't take offense to what I said, okay? and keep it up author 🥰