Comments of chapter undefined of Descent Of The Condemned

1 - Well... you may be right. The prologue came out longer than I anticipated.... (The prologue is the entire volume I) I simply wanted to explain in it the basic mechanics that I will follow. To outline the character of most of the main characters who will accompany us for most of the novel and to introduce the past of some characters. I preferred to give this at the beginning rather than forget it later. 2 As for the battle in the Forest of Night Ripples, it is meant to showcase the fighting abilities of Seraphine, Asme and the goblins. Describing the fight from Ramiel's perspective over and over again seems extremely boring to me. (It will be over soon... I hope you liked Ceti :) - Ramiel's mother). 3.Sometimes I feel like I'm spreading too much over unnecessary things, such as repeating the same descriptions, or completely trace the plot, (for example, the chapter during which Ramiel took a bath with Sarron. I got completely lost there, which was noticeable.... Unfortunately I found this interaction necessary.... Now I regret it. ) This is due to the fact that I am just beginning the adventure of writing.... P.S I didn't think it was so difficult. 4 If all goes well, in about 20 chapters I should finish Volume I. After that we will finally come out of the underground and start the real fun in the world of Avalon and beyond. P.S I hope you have fun reading this novel.