Comments of chapter undefined of Cynic’s Second Wind: DxD Chronicles - English version

One more thing is doesn't take genius to figure out u gave the mc the six eyes , the main use of six eyes wasn't just ce efficiency also help with math involved in the technique, if want to give mc a cursed technique make it some what rooted in maths , kinetic or potential energy, vectors or physics in general if u don't know any abilities go superpower wiki and type mathematics manipulation, vector manipulation, potential and kinetic energy manipulation or physics manipulation and if u scroll down u will see alist of abilities that can come from them with there own explanation and applications and users in ficition and how they use it

To bad u aren't making them mc a dragon it would been cool if he went by the name cursed dragon of the apocalypse or cursed dragon of damnation I even have art

Pls don't be overly cliche most authors will have their story in kuoh town and directly flowing canon by joining the main cast or replacing issei , have your own adventure don't try and copy another adventure u could could join Kyoto or khaos brigade or be on your own , pls this is shaping up to different, don't make another copy and paste , most authors don't have the balls to be different don't be one of them

Also pls make the harem more unique , every body keeps on doing rias and akeno so much it's disgusting when there a literally so many single women in dxd or they would do the disgusting genre of NTR For your harem if u were to listen to me this is my line up from most important to least important Runeas , Nyx , tiamat, serafall , yasaka,kuroka Lavina, Ophis (but this one is not a must most ppl don't like Lollies ) pls don't forsake me

Thanks for the chapter

Good job

bro keep posting chapters with this quality and I'll be more than fine with the delays