Comments of chapter undefined of The Ascension of Contracted Spirits

So... after reading the first two chapters I can only say they are confusing. There are a lot of weird terminology, the sentences are inconsistent and grammar makes the whole story also confusing. The only reason I will be keeping to read this is for the fast pass.....

too many terms. plus no explanation for them. the terms are usually similar so that the story is understandable and only the way they work or some other think is unique. this author in trying to be unique has gone too far with the terminology. speciall mud cast fetus perfection.. that is incomprehensible.

Thanks for the chapter and for all of your hard work author stay safe amazing chapter

All I can say is good luck because this story is just ticket fodder

now, I understand the story

amazing