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Comments of chapter undefined of Lady Arkesh

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Onlyuri
OnlyuriLv15Onlyuri

Great chapter! I feel like the duel should be over at the first point though since he was disarmed. The relationship with her brother is super cute and the way her parents are slowly being tolerated(?) works very well. It would be silly for their family relationship to change drastically just because the truth came out. I remember the mom agreed to distancing as a child since she would be leaving at 13 but then she stayed. So I'm wondering why the mom never tried to get close after the ceremony, was it just because she was used to ignoring her for years already?

EmpathicWan
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Your thoughts on why her mom might have avoided it even after she stayed are part of it actually. I don't like guiding readers towards any conclusion because I believe that part of the fun of reading something is drawing your own conclusions about characters actions, but in this case I think it's fine to explain my thoughts. Her house is primarily Patriarchal with her father's decisions being final. On top of that there's still a lingering fear and prejudice about a firstborn daughter. That kind of bias isn't solved easily. And then there was the explanation about Mari's name. Her mother was afraid to name her after the actual four leaf clover because of superstition. Keep in mind that there's still the fact that the decision to leave is ultimately up to Mari as stated in the clause in the agreement, so they can't know when she might decide to go. There's also another reason but that's a story spoiler so I can't say :)

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sleepygood
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I'm thoroughly enjoying your story. Mari's growth is very well done, and the pacing of it is just right. Noah is absolutely adorable, and it's incredible how much an innocent and naive child can heal a person. Mari's father is definitely past the point of being forgiven. Her mother though, I can sympathize with being in a patriarchal society. I'd only be disappointed that she didn't try harder.

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