Tio_Iroh99
I agree with most of these comments. When is the main character going to get involved in the story? Most of us who are reading this are DC fans we know the story of Apocalypse's Invasion of Earth. So why are we recapping in such a long chapter all of the information we're already aware of including the main characters and move on with the main gist of your story. Don't keep rehashing and reprinting. What's already happened and everybody already knows. People who are not fans of DC won't be reading this anyway. It's making it very hard to stick with this. I said, we already know this story or we wouldn't be reading it. Get to the part that's new.