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Comments of chapter undefined of DC: Spirit of Vengeance

King_Ace_
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author this story wasn't necessary if the ghost rider wasn't in it. we all know this and using two to three chapters for retelling?...you shouldn't have

Hees_Gelle
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What was the point of these last chapter? Your character wasn’t even involved

DaoistyQNGiX
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Skipping everything since it’s pointless filler

Great_maid_Oni
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Well… I understand that you wanted to put on the fight, it's good to have the explanation before your opinion (assuming he will participate) but that went to the extreme, it became pure filler…. but since when did Diana fly? sincerely, I do not know

FluxleX
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you just basically wrote movie in 3 chapter just copied the scripts

Aye_itz_cloudz
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These chaps seem like a waste

Shurasik
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Thanks for the chapter

Anthony_Huffman_1174
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I agree with most of these comments. When is the main character going to get involved in the story? Most of us who are reading this are DC fans we know the story of Apocalypse's Invasion of Earth. So why are we recapping in such a long chapter all of the information we're already aware of including the main characters and move on with the main gist of your story. Don't keep rehashing and reprinting. What's already happened and everybody already knows. People who are not fans of DC won't be reading this anyway. It's making it very hard to stick with this. I said, we already know this story or we wouldn't be reading it. Get to the part that's new.

Aye_itz_cloudz
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Thxs for the chap

Axcel_Csx
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OverlordBGs
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Nice chapter