hmm if you could add a little more detail like how the children were after his supposed 5th death or some third party conversation about the mc that would be great
It was short. I personally did not are about the childeren at all since we didn't see them much(which led me to not care about marie at all and their interaction with mc). Still not bad but imo if we could bond a little more it would have been way better. I'm still salty about boudica thing btw.