Comments of chapter undefined of Cobra Kai: Rise Of A Hanma

First time trying to get better thoughts on how to improve? what I really need to work on though are fight scenes.

Thank for the chapter

For the start is okay. If you want some inspirations i have some tips : 1- Although short here is some pretty good novel about cobra kai : King Cobra KC. 2 - You could include more fighting worlds ( undisputed , creed, jet li world , etc) In short , you could include movie and serie franchise to the universe. It would be cool if he goes from 0 baki to full baki in the serie.

You could put the dialogue in "" "Hello" And the thoughts into '' ' What a strange guy'

tory as the pairing