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Comments of chapter undefined of Flashpoint Paradox

Daoist_windfall_69
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Because of the lack of real changes, and the inability of the MC to assert himself, the story feels far too bland. I have no clue what the MC really wants and why he would keep working as a hero. Sure he wants to master his powers and level up, but he could probably do that in a million different ways. We see nothing beyond STAR city, no desire to go find some rare DC artifacts, try to uncover any enhancement serums, not trying to make real money by starting a company etc. He could easily start a company because he can do so much is such a short time. Like manifacturing new phones/drones or trying to create more sustainable energy. Instead we get a grunt with no will of his own that obeys like a dog and has the personality of moldy cardboard.

75BlackFlames
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I had planned to make that change in plot later in the novel rather than earlier because it might seem off if he just discovers it as soon as story starts.

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WarMachine78
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Things are getting interesting, looking like Reverse Flash Edoard Thawn has some work to do as well , which includes dealing with someone besides himself exploiting this alternative timeline by this mysterious anomaly that he created by being stranded here. Even though this timeline seems much the same except for a few alterations in the Flash verse. Looking forward to more of the Flashpoint Paradox Mayhem for Barry Allen and his Flash team ,HAHAHA!Continue on Cheers!

BodaoZao_CapraZao
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