Comments of chapter undefined of DC: I am the Monkey King
DC: I am the Monkey King
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RigchelLv4Rigchel
I wonder if this will become the stereotypical case of the Grandpa dying which would lead to the protagonist swearing vengeance and later fulfilling it
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Yh, no problem, it's fine. I always appreciate the constructive criticism. As for the plot thing, I'll try be more unique. Thanks
Rigchel:Pardon me. It's just that I have seen it used so many times. Also, no offense but the guardian of the protagonist suddenly leaving for an important task due to a prior commitment has been used before