NewComer714
It has become a bit monotonous, There's no exciting feeling I get like when I first found your story and read it for the first time, I wish you could have made his adventure more exciting or at least focus more on him so I don't feel so distant from the main character, it doesn't help I hate his wife đ
hope theres no collab between Suzuki and kishin, it's useless collab, Suzuki share get price share more expensive, harder for MC to buy and kishin already have the prototype and usually you collab first and make the prototype, meaning that kishin are capable to refining to the final stage. or i'm dropping itđ¤ˇââď¸
well all perspectives are good and all but iIstill long for your Suzuki or shin family perspective .. what happened with shin's elder brother(singer) was he married? does he have kids? what about shin's wife's perspective ? or of her family or younger sister. most of all shin's child pov or that of his friends or the parents of his friends... i wait for this parts of the story instead of public pov of different video games that KiShin has released.. as I am not that well acquainted with the world of games