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Comments of chapter undefined of Road to Rogue Ninja

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Road to Rogue Ninja

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Amour_Dominique
Amour_DominiqueLv1Amour_Dominique

I was a bit disappointed with these two three chapters, since Mc had high hormones and spread seeds everywhere, the story started to get weird (even when War was much better than this). I don't understand if the author did it on purpose or ran out of ideas, but I think this idea is a bit bad. Maybe because Mc is strong too quickly, the story can't keep up, especially since he has retired, don't you think?

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Egoless
EgolessLv4Egoless

still time to rewrite this bro, this twist just is not it big man

6mth
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Daoist184799
Daoist184799Lv4Daoist184799

The pregnancy is kind of stupid.There are ways to prevent it from happening .Tsume is a clan leader why would she need money from him and why would her children need to be sponsored by him.it doesn't make any sense.

6mth
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XAZVAPB0OTH
XAZVAPB0OTHLv4XAZVAPB0OTH

o Ntr estragou essa fanfic

5mth
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Osas_Destiny_4852
Osas_Destiny_4852Lv4Osas_Destiny_4852

Author what about Pakura from sand village

6mth
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tomasiva
tomasivaLv4tomasiva

no deberías haberlo echo tener sexo con cualquier mujer incluso mujeres casadas . estaba bien con tsume pero volverlo un manipulador no queda bien, creo que deberías rescribir esto.

6mth
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ObsidianEmperor
ObsidianEmperorLv5ObsidianEmperor

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Aden_Sky
Aden_SkyLv4Aden_Sky

thanks for the chapter

6mth
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