Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Heresy. Like it's not the real Adam. What do you know, a mere recent vampire from the great ante-deluvian Adam. I still remember as if it were a few months ago that he was teaching the cavemen how to hunt, harvest and build,

It was a great chapter, I especially liked that it was not from Adams point view

The chapter is good. What I like is the part where Adam shows his human knowledge that he has gathered over all these years. It makes him seem wiser and more real.(partially translated)

Thank you for the chapter! Honestly this is so good that I always look forward to when you post again. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for another Great chapter

I'm glad to see that Adam and Julius are reconnecting after so long. Also, I wonder if Adam's return will delay Carlisle Journey to the America's, or will he be staying? I can't wait to find out!

Gracias por el capitulo

TFTC

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thanks for the chapter, I loved it

Thanks for chapter

So short 😪

thanks for the chapter

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thanks for the chapter and can't wait for more

thx for the chapter

TFTC!