Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

perfect story as always just wen is his mate gonna come

Thanks for chapter

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Man I can’t wait. It’s been a while. We’re finally getting some more canon centered stuff.

this is really good to me I love how you explained it it wasn't too complicated simple enough for me to understand and I enjoyed the adventure and like how you add the present to the past thank you and waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update]

can you give us the the year he's in now it'll give us info about what's happening around that time

I hope that one of the Cullens will be a partner for the main character, it's just the most suitable

best chapter so far.. so interesting

thanks

tftc~~~○● can't wait for more. please update soon.

any new chapter

Novel is fun and good 😌😌

dropped?

Siempre q una novela q me gusta lleva mas de una semana sin subir me empiezo a sentir incomoda por todas partes almenos dime q no la vas a abandonar TTwTT

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