Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Awesome, You do you man.

Tftc was ready for the timeline to be moved up

The true is Your timeline story is much more entertaining than the actual twilight story... It give new perspective than the predictable drama of the main plot.. why not introduce enemies of vampire like organization of hunters for witches, vampire, and werewolf ...

Yesss your back.... Make adam the richest and the secret ruler in the world...

After he is done with the werewolf's, he can go to the crusade to save Byzantine or watch how it played out in history, look forward to what happens.

you should do one for the Crusade then have 2 for something like living in Interesting times that show some minor adventures and meets with historical people

Welcome back!

Thank you for the chapter! I can't to see what happens next!

Can’t wait to see what happens next. As I’m dying to see how much more he will influence history. Also so excited to see who he ends up with

Finally a new chapter

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter.

update please

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter 🙂

thanks for the chapter! and keep doing what you are doing it's definitely going great!

Thanks for chapter