Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

You should get a priest to join him or something. And tell the legend of him in his fight against evil creatures, it will be fun to see when they talk about how Adam from the Bible spends his time killing werewolves and vampires. And let future vampires see it with fear like Black the vampire hunter.

When I saw that there were 300 of them for a second, I thought you were going to have a crossover with Underworld. I remember that one movie were most of the deaths in Europe during the Black Death, was caused by packs of werewolves.

why? Why can't it be op? Why does he have to have an enemy who gives him problems? Why can't it be a "slice of life"?

i really want his mate to be Tom Bennett From World On Fire. They would make like the best power couple and their chemistry would be obsessive

Are these the werewolves that are briefly mentioned in the twilight books

There's no need to get an antagonist on pair with the MC, he is already quite OP, so making another OP character in Twilight would be too illogical and in my opinion would ruin the flow of the story.

This is simply the best twilight fic, in fact I believe it has the potential to be so much more.

Great chapter. Will he get something from werewolf venom?

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

I could imagine that there are more shapshifter tribes. Like snakes or bears or lions or shark or any other really

El enemigo final sería el adán verdadero el de la biblia

I heard somewhere that Cain is the first vampire. But I'm not sure.

Him enemy.... it's Kain

I thank you for the chapter.

tftc~~~○●

There should be a first vampire, progenitor style

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter