Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

We will be patiently waiting, this has been one of the best twilight stories ive ever read, keep up the goid work

I do enjoy an author that is not stressed out I see this as a good thing. Enjoy the break and will be waiting patiently for updates!

is ok

take your time. you're giving us free entertainment in your free time, you deserve a break dude.

Can you make him go to Hawaii during 1882 - 1886. During that time Lolani palace was built and had electricity installed and was extremely expensive just to give an overview the White House didn’t have electricity till 1892. Lolani palace was extremely expensive basically bankrupting the Hawaiian treasury. Lolani palace was extremely fancy it was probably one of the most advanced places back then. Hawaii was used as a pit stop for boats in the Pacific Ocean as they would have been on sea for months so you can just make it a quick pitstop

You should do this same idea but for mass effect

Author I suggest you go ahead and write 20-50 chapters in advanced . It’s a bigger leg room and just gives you more ample of time . I mean what is 2 weeks of waiting for a consistent updates. I’d rather wait 2 weeks than inconsistent updates .

No probs, take your time <3

Thanks for the journey. Patiently waiting to continue.

thanks for informing us. enjoy your break buddy 👍👍

Thanks for the chapter

Take the time you need

just wondering what is the mc's eye colour

Thanks for continuing working on making it better, so far is going great and have not been able to detect plot holes and the way you make it flow reads great. Will wait eagerly for your return to it. BTW, could you tell your plan for your other fic? Thanks!

Have fun on your break, can’t wait for you to start writing again. Ps:please heavily consider having Alice cullen as his mate