I've had such a nice tine reading since I far. Little typos here and there, but everything else I think is fine. I recommend you using grammarly. There's also a chrome extension of grmmarly if you opt to use it. It will help you make less typos and grammar mistakes.
Are there other supernaturals in this world besides those of twilight? And if so, will they be from other works that involve the supernatural or just self-created characters?
