Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

This chapter was deep

Mr. Author can you please change the cover picture to a more mature, masculine Adam.p.s. I suggest you to use the photo of Henry cavill from the Witcher or like Chris Hemsworth or Jason momoa but with white-silver hair.

The best way for him to get through these events is to capitalize, as he did in Rome

i don't really mind for the fast story, because the longer the story the more possibility it might get dropped.

Great chapter, thanks!

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