Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

oh I can understand the pain went m 10 week pup wrecked my chair

and people back in the day matured faster 40 was old then

Thanks for the chapter Author. (P.S. This could be a Me problem, idk) But, seriously, for the past few chapters, this story feels like it could be in a normal fantasy world of vampires with no relation to Twilight. If the MC doesn't want to change history/the plot, then what is the use of being in the story so far back. You could have easily made the MC reborn in the modern timeline, and there would have been almost no changes. An idea could be that MC creates a group and takes the place of the Volturi.... This is just an example to show a change from the story. Because right now in the story, if the MC didn't exist, there would be almost no major changes in the world (despite that MC is 4k+ years old)

Julie's can be her mate

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chap! ✨

I thank you for the chapter.

tftc~~~○○●

the only problem I have is how short these chapters are. Anyone with decent ability to read would eat this story like a snack at this size. Other than that tftc. I'm enjoying this

Thanks for chapter, hope Jane is Julius' mate, good addition to the group and ensures loyalty 😁

thanks for the chapter

please more chapters

Thanks for chapter

thanks for the chapter

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