Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

I keep saying it. The mc needs his own organization of immortals. Sooner or later they will know where that gold is and they will try to steal it.

I am reading your other story as well and, man! , both are great in my opinion. Kudos to you!

Please be Alice Cullen pleeeeeeeease!!!!!!!! be Adam's mate. 🙏🙏🙏😭

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

more please 🙏

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

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tftc~~~○● I'm picking this book again, hoping that it got interesting. the reason I stopped reading this novel is because the story started to revolve around banking. this time, I'm hoping that it will move on to the next arc.

Yo quería ver cómo conocías a jisus

Thanks for chap! Looking forward for more! Hopefully you're well Author! More power to thee~

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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Obrigada pelo capítulo

La verdad quiero y al mismo tiempo no quiero leer tu otra novela que sea tan buena como está y empieces como con esta a subir capítulos cada 2 semanas