Comments of chapter undefined of DXD: As a OC Primordial

see now this is starting to become less of an actual story and more like you're just describing things to us it would like MC interaction man not the oh well she gave me this throne then confessed to me and I got a harem and then this happened this happened this happened this happened this happened this happened this happened and this happened the end of the chapter

while the story is fast-paced I still think it's great, and I can understand that you just want to get to the canon timeline but why not have some fun before that happens. like maybe have an arc where the mc's kid(s) help out one of the factions durring a historical event or maybe one of the devils try to kill/capture/reincarnate one of his people/kids. or you could add some crossover elements like fate and hellsing. or you could even add some isekai, maybe this can lead to the introduction of other world gods(ExE, that time I got reincarnated as a slime, ect) well anyways thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter 👍

is this dropped?

Awesome

In my view, issei and his companions need a miracle to beat the EXE gods, an example of why they need it is simple, regalzava killed great red, And he didn't even use all his strength, as it is also said in the manga that his brothers have almost the same strength as him, for these reasons alone we can understand that Issei and the rest are waiting for a miracle

It would be interesting for you to add the EXE gods, but I advise you to think carefully beforehand, as their addition in the manga by the author was a shot in the foot, as they broke the balance of power in the manga.

Where r u?

Thanks for the chapter !!!

interesting story more of a this happened type than the first few chapters it would be nice if this was clarified. But there are many ways you can improve just read everyone else's comments. Keep up the work and as it gets to more modern history please give us a first pov

Update?

If and I mean if I am not wrong, i think this work has been dropped. But well we'll see what happens I'll add this to my library and if I get the notification in 1 week than its okay and if not than that's that. See you guys.

Dude we need an arc maybe how you and Medea and Medusa seduce the oc or just how civilization grow or how battles?

please update

your making an autobiography instead of a story

Great book so far

Thanks for the chapter👍👌

thanks for the chp

Good Chapter