Comments of chapter undefined of Mob in a fantasy novel

Mob in a fantasy novel

Revireuu

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Tenzing_Choeying_5139Lv13Tenzing_Choeying_5139

When will mc reach Tier 2?

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CGenipperteingaLv2CGenipperteinga

Well your certainly arent trying really hard.

Revireuu:I'm planning on making this novel a weak-to-strong novel. Plenty of adventure, exploration and challenges Sorin has to face. He'll slowly get stronger, but I'll try not to make it tedious.

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wap100Lv4wap100

Try writing more interactions of him and other people. Write more dialogues, what impact did the previous incident have on other students? How is his relationship with that girl he tried using as bait now?

7mth

Suzaku_Lv4Suzaku_

Thanks for the chapter. I agree with you.

7mth