Comments of chapter undefined of Mob in a fantasy novel

Sigh, bro your the embodiment of the sentence "being a drag" honestly bro the amount of cursing i did while reading this chapter full of repetitive BS cant be counted. Mannnn, guess it wont be long till i lose my interest in this work if this goes on. Hope your future readers would be more patient and understanding towards ur work , otherwise they will find themselves dropping this work immediately