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Comments of chapter undefined of Mind Controlled My Way To Revenge

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Mind Controlled My Way To Revenge

GilgameshTheFirst

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B_DRAG
B_DRAGLv13B_DRAG

I don't think there's any need to write such long flashback scenes. However, if a flashback is necessary for the plot, it should be summarized in just three to four paragraphs.And also, author, I find the constant focus on bullying to be increasingly bothersome and unpleasant.

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GilgameshTheFirst
GilgameshTheFirstAuthorGilgameshTheFirst

thanks ,some others complain about this when I first release this chapter ,so I fixed the future chapters ,you can continue reading and you will see

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Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv14Love_C_raft

okay you need to fking add pov changes, sometimes I don know who is talking.

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That1OtakuDude
That1OtakuDudeLv13That1OtakuDude

Let's not go there with the flashbacks plz they're annoying not only cause of the mc but also because you don't need this much content for the flashbacks to continue with the plot

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Mouse_is_rat
Mouse_is_ratLv4Mouse_is_rat

Will flashbacks happen every time he gets his revenge on someone

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