Comments of chapter undefined of Evil Naruto: Teuchi died, so Naruto turned Evil

I don't think Naruto will be dead last after all in this timeline he had trained hard unlike in the Canon excuse of Naruto. So may be you can rewrite it and change it onto a average after all by doing clone justu in repetition he would have practised until he fainted in a way it would have come as natural as breathing after all the more practice a justu the higher proficiency you have even if said justu isn't compatible to you and this Naruto who doesn't know kindness would emotionally withdrawn and wouldn't act irrationally. Kakashi would rather keep secrets with himself than tell it even if it would help said person considering how one revealed it to him in Canon. So it is kind of too dramatic and Naruto would rather keep secrets with himself considering how Mizuki the one who knows Naruto secret tried to kill him. Anyway these are my suggestions applying them or not to improve the story is up to you. After all this is your story. Have a nice day Author.

Author, will you update this story soon? It's great so far. Thanks for the Chapter.

Thanks for the Chapter