Calleum_Artori
I Like the Idea that MC Go against gods. Not Just against existing Gods but god's by themselves. Idea that gods must protect humanity. He rebel against that idea claiming that humans are strong enough to survive themselves. Sun breath in Kamado pray for God and Sun specifically. He made him rebel against Darkness and Moon. I really hope that you can save this idea. Rebellion against Fate, Gods and every ROB that try to use humanity in any way.
Truly a master's work. Although I still want to complain about the exaggerated sentimentality, that would make MC's psychological maturation arc completely useless, and since MC's story before being transported hasn't been released yet, I can't complain about the character's progress or inconsistency. Now about the variation of the breathing technique, I find it interesting to use plasma instead of fire because plasma is literal raw energy, which absorbs the electrons that naturally pass through the object that is in contact to continue existing and consuming more electrons and consequently decomposing matter into primary particles such as protons, which when you stop to think about it is very close to what happens before the creation of a supernova where matter decomposes into energy so quickly and violently that the star's own gravitational field cannot contain its advance , thus causing its crust to explode and crush its core, now composed mainly of iron, into a sphere 70,000 times smaller with a minimum density of 10 septillion times the density of the material found on Earth, thus creating a neutron star, which makes me think about adding this concept mixed with the magic already present in the mc's body and soul, causing the energy to condense and become stronger/efficient than before and not leaving the physical body and soul aside since a weak container would simply explode making the idea simply ridiculous and impossible to practice.