Comments of chapter undefined of Streamer in the Omniverse

I like the different POV. I especially like how it was at the end of the story. Not that it doesn’t matter but rather it doesn’t detract from the main story. It only enhances it by building up other characters and devas impact on the world around him. Nicely done! Some advice in my opinion, Some more small mundane details would of been nice. such as rei saying, “maybe I can ask for a plushie..” or “I hope we don’t smell to bad..” random small unimportant things to provide small nuances to things. In this example rei doesn’t want to feel alone so a plushie reassures her and is slightly envious of Saya. Or the smell, would be something the MC notices and realizes no one showered! how uncivilized! Lol

please save the little girl from the show. I would feel bad if she died

Loving it so far and the pov is good so keep it up 👍

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I read way too much Worm fanfiction to enjoy an interlude

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Awesome!!! I love rei!!!! She deserves more love!!!

I like, i give stones, you give chapters

Thanks for the chapter

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The other point of view seems fine to me also thanks for the chap ter

thank you for the chapter ☺️

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